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Sunset

Waiting for the night

I stand silently and watch

The sun's rays descend

— WaitingAlone, Jan 29, 2008

Critiques

RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 5 months ago

simple

Perhaps a bit too simple. Nice image, but it reads more like a sentence than a poem. ~ Ronda

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