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Life Is Improbable

Let Madness compete
with the guy up the street.
He's been wide-eyed for days
and refuses to sleep.

Let Joyful reside
somewhere close to the tide
where the sun's honest rays
leave her nothing to hide.

Let Anger reap woe
for the losses he sowed,
and the grief that will stay
until Sensitive goes.

Let Genius prepare--
don the mask he will wear
and compose what he'll say
when the Stupid get there.

Let Loyal rejoice
for her powerful choice:
bright as first light of day,
resonant as her voice.

Let Reality hide
for the downtrodden tribe
who would keep her at bay
during uncertain times.

Let Kinship remain
when all others are slain.
As your countenance frays
she's there sharing your pain.

Insanity, happiness,
rage and intelligence--
steadfast, illogical,
life is improbable.

— lexi1a, Jan 25, 2008

Critiques

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purplemoondoll

18 years 6 months ago

Let Kinship remain when all

Let Kinship remain when all others are slain. I like the steady flow and rhyme. The title works. The personification works well too. I relate to and applaud the sentiments expressed here. Nice work - I look forward to seeing more. This is great writing. :-) Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.

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