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Gardens Of Twilight ( Italian eight line Sonnet )

Upon dragonflies and diamonds bright There comes this unyielding need As the sunset does slowly bleed Into the frail skin of night When only hearts know the might Of how they too can be freed To be planted like a thirsting seed Into the gardens of twilight.
— j_h08, Jan 25, 2008

Critiques

Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

18 years 6 months ago

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I thought this was beautiful!Loved the title and this flowed really well As the sunset does slowly bleed,into the frail skin of the night fantastic!
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j_h08

18 years 6 months ago

Thank you

I appreciate your kind words and tahnk you again for a great review. These Sonnets are tough but learnable glad to see the climb is not as high as it appeared thank you again.

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