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Jan 25, 2008
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The Test
It was a cold morning
Heart-beats, echoed in the room.
Stomach did a cartwheel and landed with a thump,
Legs felt like two logs resting.
I thought to myself:
There is more to life, than losing or winning
There is a difference between ‘saying’ and ‘believing’
Life is like a child learning how to walk,
With each fall, he can only learn to stand up tall.
During the test, every second seemed eternal
I fought every hurdle like a soldier in a battle.
Every now and then, my heart sank….
Like gravity pulling a falling man.
At the end, the world stopped spinning
And then I heard him singing:
‘Congratulations!’
‘You will get your driving licence in two weeks’
— amilu, Jan 25, 2008
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Mark
18 years 6 months ago
Amilu, did they give ya a temporary license?
Mark
18 years 6 months ago
OK I see the problem
amilu
18 years 6 months ago
hi mark, Your comments are
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