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O

theory

 

 

drift gravitate

alongside and width of

few and far of many

books spent read

forgotten

beer cans scavenged

coffees sipped

in faceless places

bars perused and

ruffled

warriors poets killers

thieves

and mothers and fathers

 

epileptic fits

and diagnosis

medications

evalutaions

truncation of family tree

no contact

 

imposed isolation

few human

association

not that its

aggravation

 

love nights slender

hours

alone

sedation

elation

 

cant forget the

count downs

the inner city

meltdowns

 

sweet like sugar

served with ice

 

aint nothing

to put together

just wear it

like worn leather

 

no context

just convex

bounce the

signal

sit and mingle

 

   O

 

 

 

— orgami, Jan 19, 2008

Critiques

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barbsdad2003

18 years 6 months ago

I like this ...

what looks like free association, but somehow stitches ... to make a pattern. Few words from many thoughts do create a mood, by golly! Fascinating! Thanx, Chuck

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