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Ancientone
Jan 15, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Wanking (An Acrostic)

 

Wanking

(An Acrostic)

 

Willy Wonka wanks for Chocolate more,

agitated libidos give their all, a girl to score,

nakedness shown for building lust by web cam,

kinky messages sent, eroticism brought to the jam,

indigo thoughts given, making a girl's soft zone wet,

needs for sexual gratification that make everyone fret,

gooey sensations with frustrations, portals close in debt.

— Ancientone, Jan 15, 2008

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purplemoondoll

18 years 4 months ago

Good observations

of what I imagine the internet scene is like. A nicely written poem though! Indigo thoughts? I couldn't quite get the association? I have no opinion either way re porn - apart from when folk are exploited of course. To me its a plastic world. Each to their won as they say! Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
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Ancientone

18 years 4 months ago

Lonely thoughts and....

low self esteem are what I was trying to get at with indigo, being dark blue. Have you heard of indigo women? I was also trying to inject a bit a humor. It is a very plastic world, credit cards and materialism pervade our cultures of today, pop culture and all. Even politics is perpertuated by and perpetuating such notions of the good life, ugh! Thanks Kaz, glad you appreciated my thoughts on porn and such. Patrick/AO