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Said the Fly
The fly in my oatmeal
Who, earlier did escape
The deadly spider just outside
The restaurants back door
Near the sleeping red roses and growling tiger lilies
I saw the torn web, on my hurried tread in
I had admired it the last few days
As the morning sun would light up the dew drops trapped there within
Like an electronic neon sign
I paid little attention to its demise, as I was late for my tour of duty
He said to me, without speaking a word, as I sat down to my morning meal, oatmeal
Steaming hot and reeking of cinnamon, with lots of sugar and a splash of 2% milk
He said; and I quote
"Life is what you make it, go ahead an take it
It's to short to try and fake it and sometimes
You'll break its entanglements
While trying to get to your own table"
The proof to his little rhyme, was there in front of me
With one leg torn off and the other three bound by a silvery silken thread
At the other end, the entangled spider
I think, I will head the words of the fly and not that of the spider's
A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man
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