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Nothing's your answer
When you find yourself lost
look to the sky for answers
a place of infinity
where the stars are the dancers
and time is nonexistent
no thought is your cancer
the emptyness is a cold frost
leaving room for my warm thoughts
a place that seamlessly never ends
a place for me to comprehend
and everything is so distant
and there is so much space for an answer
think of the stars
as thoughts in my head
think of the light
as my visions instead
when there is nothing
everything is plain
and when there is nothing
fill the spaces with pleasure
leave no room for the pain
sometimes simplicity
causes a dynamic electricity
thoughts flow through your mind
and everything is suddenly aligned
and i know the truth as if i were blind
when you are lost
feel the warm thoughts
nothing is a space
that leaves a place for an answer...
Critiques
purplemoondoll
18 years 6 months ago
sometimes simplicitycauses
Mark
18 years 6 months ago
mmmmm
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