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Winter Skies (A Haiku)

 

Winter Skies

(A Haiku)

 

Winter skies are gray,

the cold and dank drain the soul

for want of blue skies.

— Ancientone, Jan 04, 2008

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Ancientone

18 years 6 months ago

Comes with age and...

Thanks moonman! Being Ancient isn't all it's cracked up to be. You have to go through real hell first, learn all the forbidden knowledges and still be able to smile some. When I pick up almost any book today, I say to myself, "Oh! I know this story better than the author themselves!" A lost love used to call me ancient is why I picked this handle. :) Have a gooday! :) Patrick/AO

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