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Dec 27, 2007
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Visions of Clarity in combat
Once there was a man
with power in his hand
could he understand?
what the world has planned?
his hands were steady
as a certain stance he readies
His footing was strong
as if all his fears were gone
the light of a firefly
a speed beyond the eye
he was a man...
with the will of a samurai
FIghting for good
because he understood
The power in his hand
He wasnt just a man...
he was a samurai
— thesoundofmerk, Dec 27, 2007
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meic
18 years 7 months ago
The code of the samurai
weirdelf
18 years 7 months ago
Like Meic, the code of Bushido
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