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Dec 24, 2007
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soulless terrible
out of the heaving overhead
landing like dry kisses
on my hot forehead
beautiful crystals of snow
I want to reach up
and be torn from this earthbound
existance
ejected through airless space
travel forever
a speck of nothing
past rotting fires of exploded
stars
gasses billowed out
ejected in green STARBRIGHT
colours
spools of galaxies tilting
littering the coal darkness
like bright polished
thoughts
I'm cold and frozen
laying here
no one knows
no one cares
snow drifts down
forever
and they melt
like tears
O
— orgami, Dec 24, 2007
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sunnyhill
18 years 7 months ago
soulless terrible
Patthepoet
18 years 7 months ago
"Soulless terrible review
themoonman
18 years 7 months ago
Some great lines...
IKnowNoBox
18 years 7 months ago
Space Snow.
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