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All upon my tree. reminds me...

  The branches on my tree ,
Remind me,
Of how He holds us in His arms.

The ornaments on my tree,
Remind me,
Of all my friends and family.

The lights on my tree,
Remind me,
Of the star that lit the way,
To where baby Jesus lay.

The gifts beneath my tree,
Remind me,
Of the gift we received.

The giving to others,
Reminds me,
Of what has been given to us all.

The Angel that sits on top my tree,
Reminds me,
Of what he wants us to be.

Remember to give to others,
All year through,
For all the things in life,
Was given unto you.
— cricket, Dec 04, 2007

Critiques

Mark

Mark

18 years 7 months ago

A very pretty write

for the season Cricket, a solidifying last stanza - cheers to you ! Mark
C

cricket

18 years 7 months ago

thanks mark,

for your comments.. yes I like the last stanza also.. I was hoping it would get a point across... as we should give and not worry about receiving in return.. thanks again..cricket
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Ancientone

18 years 7 months ago

Lovely spiritual thoughts

Well written expression of love and the Christmas Spirit, Cricket. :) Sorry to be so long in responding to your request, dear friend. Wishing you the best Holiday season ever. :) Patrick/AO

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