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Nov 27, 2007
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Tiptoe through the warming
The toes
of Michelangelo's David
are musculinely strong,
second toe a touch longer
than the big toe
as befits a gifted man.
This is how I walk the earth -
in Michelangelo's toes,
gripping the soil
just hard enough
to keep it steadily waltzing
around the sun
in its Gallilean galleon.
My toes tread carefully
among the growing leaves of grass
and upward glancing, jogging centipedes;
carefully on this oblate earth
with all our growing growing woes
to keep my footprint small
I walk on my toes.
— DeWaal, Nov 27, 2007
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theladyblue
18 years 8 months ago
an easy tread
DeWaal
18 years 8 months ago
Thanks Emarie, for the good
theladyblue
18 years 8 months ago
a cunning and varied sort
meic
18 years 8 months ago
A toehold of any kind takes
DeWaal
18 years 8 months ago
Hello Mike “A toehold of
Mark
18 years 8 months ago
it seems
DeWaal
18 years 8 months ago
Look at your hand
Mark
18 years 8 months ago
Yes it is strange to look at the palm and
DeWaal
18 years 8 months ago
It's in the relative length
Mark
18 years 8 months ago
Thanks lol
DeWaal
18 years 8 months ago
Hi Mark I’m using this
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