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Rivers' Bend

 

A place  A compass  In direction we now lean

We need our bend in the river  Our wooded scene

 

Like others that have come before

Protecting our valued afore

 

We are returning to our source  The Eternal light

The essence of the pastors force  Equal to our fight

 

We need our bend in the river  Our wooded scene

 

What's been said is vague  Simple and quite trite

The bend in the river funnels our sight

 

Pleas empty unless fostered by empathy

How we receive them shapes our humanity

 

Our judgment be not clouded  Lest speeches that stir

Homage to the expendable  Who we once were

 

We need our bend in the river  Our wooded scene

 

A school of thought  That 'We Get As Far As We Venture'

Ever downstream  The river sings in surreal splendor

 

Our river shares not  Our past direction  Last known

River bends revealing   Directions leading home

 

The waterwheel  Rustling water  Showers us in sound

Drowning the vast world out  Numbing us to places found

 

Defend our bend in the river  Our wooded scene

 

This moment crawls then  Releases us our 'Rivers Bend'

 

 

— DDCdogood, Nov 05, 2007

Critiques

Mark

Mark

18 years 8 months ago

DDC so true for me too

to escape the city for her is so cool I really wish I coud more often rather then like sitting here like on a stool but I do get away as much as I can and visit her up land and to ocean sand and as many places inbetween like rivers too (this one in town can be quite a sceen). Thanks
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DDCdogood

18 years 8 months ago

Escapes Necessary

DDCdogood You're very welcome. These words are useful, only if someone can relate. Peace DDC
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Conect11

18 years 8 months ago

this reminds me of a place

near where I lived in Sudbury, Mass too many years ago. Peaceful, necessary. God, how I am reminded that I need a place of peace again. You transported me there, and it is much appreciated. Mark W.
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DDCdogood

18 years 8 months ago

Reminds me' Too

DDCdogood Be the change your looking for. Your Welcome Mark W. Peace DDC
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

Even when I look at a bushy potted plant

in an apartment complex(which my friends have plenty of.)I never miss nature...more then I do in the autumn I like the added grit of the elements.I will take a desert scene over a five star hotel any day. In ink, David
Mark

Mark

18 years 8 months ago

one place I have not been

the desert on a starry night wow will be filling water jugs and packing some gear I think early next year as there is some desert down in FL. Oh what a thought David !
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

Never been to an ice flow

like the ones on the way to the summit of everest I am sure though theat if I did go It would take my breath away and to have our breath taking by nature is an act of natures divinity
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

I have vague memories of...

The praries of the midwest the greatest meadow pales in comparision to such granduer Buffalo highways have left an impression in my life they are also a part of my river bend
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

how I would like to find a .....

thicket of brier patches to climb inside and reflect where nobody would think to disturb me that I may connect with the message nature hides there for us to find if we only see the vision outside the offered scene A swamp? Then again Mark you are a poetic Travel Agent.
Mark

Mark

18 years 8 months ago

Swamp?

"Wild Things" there makes me nervous - know I would love it ! First stop has got to be Ocala? and whoosh the ever slow flow river "The Glades" Marble Travel (in writing) Mark

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