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Pain (A Quatrain)

 

Pain

 

Do you want to understand? seek the pain!

The pain and suffering we encounter

makes us do strange things in vain,

our reactionary force damaged, we flounder.

 

Time does not heal all as some think.

What we experience in life takes hold,

though how consequential may bring the shrink,

less so? still an impact that makes us cold.

 

Blame is not the game I assure you,

understanding more is what's required,

as no one understands enough to sue

and life is very hard as pain is acquired.

 

Understanding may take more time,

as once pain has taken hold so bold,

it's difficult to see how far it may climb,

complexity adding confusion untold.

 

Pain makes us stronger it is written,

but too much pain breaks the soul in two,

yet understanding allows one to be forgiven,

self love and self esteem, the better view.

— Ancientone, Nov 03, 2007

Critiques

weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 8 months ago

Well put and wise.

The next person who told me my pain would make me stronger was going to get some inflicted on them! 8) cheers, Jess
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Ancientone

18 years 8 months ago

Pain sucks.....

and it brings more balance than strength if you deal with it rationally. Having someone understand makes you stronger, shrinking from life otherwise, maybe. You have to walk in someone's shoes before you judge them. I'v known enough pain to walk in most people's shoes if only in mind's sight. Glad you liked it friend, not my best verse though for sure. Patrick/AO
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cricket

18 years 8 months ago

Pain sucks so much

I totally get this one friend, I believe what don't kill us makes us stronger, but to much pain, is something I've had to bear at times. its not a good thing really, I really liked this one friend, saving it, It is so much what I think and feel, like ur in my head, you have a way of doing that with ur writes , which is a good thing, thanks for sharing, great title, good flow. hugs. cricket
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Ancientone

18 years 8 months ago

It's not....

one of my better writes, but it says what I wanted it to say. :) Patrick

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