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Oct 31, 2007
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under the metal chrome galleons
full of her pleasures
and tangled broach brocade
carving her way
through the waters
giving her ghostly wager
..O..
— orgami, Oct 31, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 8 months ago
this is part of the haunting quality I love about your work.
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