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Oct 31, 2007
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tarnished expression
you live in this simple world
of backwards illusion
foggy and cracked in your corner
come meet with me
again
when the sun is sharply
setting and the light is
just so
i can see the halfway of you
looking out once more again
the eyes so circular and haunted
the years have drawn you down
the bones of so many
others have
come and gone
..O..
— orgami, Oct 31, 2007
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dbrock
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tarnished expression
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