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Oct 28, 2007
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corners
corners of a room
and ambience
like whitewash.
laughter, and
Joy
spread.
today turned
a corner
today
ballots
were drawn.
maybe I saw
the light of day
by seeing
the truth in you.
— sumsum22, Oct 28, 2007
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Mark
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In reality, “you” is a
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