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GLYPH

 

 

such a deep ache

where the weight of me

tilts on bones

 

i would take apart

the cairn

to hold that action

gather rotted nails

pitted glass

 

fevers reach turns

within my abdomen

lined like sodden

red silk

exclamations

and rebuttals

 

id take you out and

put me in

 

cant do anything

this late again

 

count the palm

stones

deftly

like crows

shadows

 

..O..

— orgami, Oct 26, 2007

Critiques

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orgami

18 years 9 months ago

title meaning

glyph message in stone writing on rock or bone stone as in Petro-glyph which we have near a town called Peterborough Ontario Canada thousand years old carved inch deep in rock through white qaurtz to a black layer of rock underneath its very large rounded area anyway in my poem it could be a burial marker or it could be a stone marked with a spell word to release whats haunted in the heart the heart could be the stone that has the image message word spell etched or written or somewhere in the cairn is an item a bone a stone that has the glyph archealogy has always been a fascinating subject for me since Howard Carters stories back in public school ..O..
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 9 months ago

Wow a Wow

That I may learn something new each day That I may know I have much to learn that I may be simplly awed

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