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Oct 15, 2007
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headphones and the submergence of nights tonal qaulities
twist the tight plastic cap
dig with my fingers for the slender pill
gently place it on my tongues flat
tip
and take a sip
of non name cola
tilt back my tangled hair head
swallow the bitter dry
hope
and wait
tonight the festival of music brings
me songs
chariot verses of weathered torso
mannerisms
pale cusps of womens sly glances
the dance of dawn
let the night live on
and where
in the thick rain
in forgotten years
you wound my heart with pain
saving
"I Love you"
"Let me be your girl"
let us slay the dragon of all doubts
jealousy
feed his heart to the fire of remembrance
we shall reunite our sad oaths
and cloak our age with innocence
…O…
— orgami, Oct 15, 2007
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