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Sep 29, 2007
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A Psychedelic Pantoum
A vivid green cat strolled fast across the ceiling
As the wolves disappeared into the walls
The sky was stumbling neatly underfoot
And birds perched high above in the roots of deep blue trees
As the wolves disappeared into the walls
Bright clouds growled, thick with lightning
And birds perched high above in the roots of deep blue trees
While I dreamt out loud, silently snoring underwater
Bright clouds growled, thick with lightning
Dark stones shone with brilliant thunder
While I dreamt out loud, silently snoring underwater
Obliviously aware of nothing at all
Dark stones shone with brilliant thunder
The sky was stumbling neatly underfoot
Obliviously aware of nothing at all
A vivid green cat strolled fast across the ceiling
— waterdragon, Sep 29, 2007
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IKnowNoBox
18 years 10 months ago
This word air and ground collision
Mizkaja
18 years 10 months ago
A Psychedelic Pantoum
barbsdad2003
18 years 9 months ago
Wonderful, the ...
Calliope
18 years 9 months ago
Beautiful imagery
waterdragon
18 years 9 months ago
I'm surprised none of you
IKnowNoBox
18 years 9 months ago
Oh I knew and that is why I said
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