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Sep 15, 2007
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a huge sex problem
it’s true! it’s true!—
and not just point of view—
neurotic Freud had such!
a huge sex problem,
one indeed p’raps could’ve,
if one p’raps would’ve,
with assistance much
of a polluting, competent
careering crew,
been predisposed to drive
a monster truck through …
and through and through …
and through …
and through and through.
— barbsdad2003, Sep 15, 2007
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IKnowNoBox
18 years 10 months ago
This should....
IKnowNoBox
18 years 10 months ago
Did you wear slippers when you wrote this?
Conect11
18 years 10 months ago
think
barbsdad2003
18 years 10 months ago
Sorry, Mark
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