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Sep 14, 2007
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I nodded my head,
listening rythm of the earth,
as i got inspired to smile .
Yes it’s nice.
I love the tall iroko
that stands at that path of the road,
its tall green slim leaves trills.
Ah! Trees still dance?
Africa own dances well,
and i bet natures’s superb
I saw mini soldiers beheading these fat elephant
with a nice smiles on their faces as their eyes
went through the tentacles,sipping it’s last honey
and making the cycle circled.
Nature,nature….
Africa.. africa.
praise to nature,
and all its wonders
— ellisville, Sep 14, 2007
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IKnowNoBox
18 years 10 months ago
I have been nearer to Africia...
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
Superb, Ellis
weirdelf
18 years 9 months ago
we might have had our
IKnowNoBox
18 years 9 months ago
Really I could careless what Ellis Thinks
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