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SUPERB

I nodded my head,

listening rythm of the earth,

as i got inspired to smile .

Yes it’s nice.

 

I love the tall iroko

that stands at that path of the road,

its tall green slim leaves trills.

Ah! Trees still dance?

Africa own dances well,

and i bet natures’s superb

 

I saw mini soldiers beheading these fat elephant

with a nice smiles on their faces as their eyes

went through the tentacles,sipping it’s last honey

and making the cycle circled.

Nature,nature….

Africa..  africa.

praise to nature,

and all its wonders

— ellisville, Sep 14, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 9 months ago

we might have had our

we might have had our differences but this is different. This is about the site. You don't comment on anyone else's poetry. That is selfish and egocentric. We are not your fan club. This is an interactive poetry workshop. Participate or piss off. I will not comment on any of your poems and I urge others to do the same until you start to give back. Jess

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