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My Serious Husband
He is usually there for me ...
He's worked hard for his living,
He understands life’s a live sport
and can be so very forgiving
He knows just what to say
as he sweetly takes my hand
This man, I Love him so….He’s
My Husband....
Our wedding was so special
as we created memories...
I’ll never forget his proposal
even though he didn’t get on his knees:
Today I Love him more than ever
as we both grow to understand..
We have a special bond, He's a serious man..
My husband…this serious man
Critiques
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
I love the sincerety here
IKnowNoBox
18 years 10 months ago
A piece I am without the words to ...
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