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My Serious Husband

                         He is usually there for me ...

                               He's worked hard for his living,

                         He understands life’s a live sport

                               and can be so very forgiving

                        He knows just what to say

                               as he sweetly takes my hand

                        This man, I Love him so….He’s

                                      My Husband....

                        Our wedding was so special

                                   as we created memories...

                         I’ll never forget his proposal

                                    even though he didn’t get on his knees:

                         Today I Love him more than ever

                                     as we both grow to understand..

                         We have a special bond,  He's a serious man..

                         My husband…this serious man

                       

— Antoinette Marie White, Sep 05, 2007

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