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orgami
Aug 31, 2007 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

flames still flicker

 

 

the stones are warm

the fires alive

but i must get home

 

before the snows

before the cold

 

at last i can lay my weary heart

and shut my eyes

swallow the pain

 

 

— orgami, Aug 31, 2007
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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 11 months ago

Like Robert Frosts

"Stopping by woods on a snowy evening" but more real. Don't go far man! Will truly miss you and your poetry. Thoughts and prayers are with you. cheers, Jess
Mark

Mark

18 years 10 months ago

Everything Jess said and

he just said it perfect. I can only ad my nice! Nice! I can relate to the burn out - oh man can I :-) I hope you gain strength in mind and body soon. Joy and Peace, Mark L

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