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Aug 30, 2007
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Alien Worlds
They’re somewhat primitive
They’ve only been one planet away.
They’re pretty savage too
They use their own kind as prey.
Should we make first contact
Or should we simply observe?
They’re technologically inferior
Perhaps our anonymity we should preserve.
We’ve monitored their broadcasts
They believe they are alone.
In this universe, so vast
They’re quite limited in what they know.
Whenever we’ve been seen
Their Government explains it away.
Telling their people we’re weather balloons
Hoping to lead them astray.
Do you think these simple beings
Will ever be ready for the truth.
That when we speak of Alien worlds
We’re speaking Earth, of you.
— bellavistabear, Aug 30, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
Cool and clever
bellavistabear
18 years 11 months ago
Well Thank you!
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