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Mad Love

 

A feeling stirring

Deep within

Loosing all sanity

Letting go of all the pain

Forgetting what life was like alone

Aching for their touch

Dieing for their lips

Mad Love

Two hearts beating as one

Missing them too much

Crazy when your apart

Sanity no longer in your veins

No longer do you see life from your eyes

But from a perspective

Choosing rights and wrong

That no longer affect only you

Mad love

It is the love of a life time

The love that lasts forever

A fire that burns bright

A flame that never goes out

Mad Love

Loving with insanity

Mad Love

— poet_inside, Aug 06, 2007

Critiques

weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 11 months ago

I sometimes suspect you are nearly as cunning as barbsdad.

I am not sure if this is straight-forward and even, sorry, a bit silly or if it is ironic. I am not even sure if your spell-checker let you down or if there/their and vain/vein are clever plays on words. Intriguing. Love the ending. cheers, Jess
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poet_inside

18 years 11 months ago

Sorry

Completely undersatnd ya on this one, it was something I wrote for my myspace just figured I'd post it up. didn't catch the there/their sorry about that, and I overlookded the vain I belive I clicked ignore on that one. Thanks for the input! Brittany Rae

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