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Judith
Jul 30, 2007 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

The Horses Glory

           Look back at our struggle for freedom,

         Trace our present day’s strength to it’s sourse;

            And you’ll find that man’s pathway to glory

         Is strewn with the bones of the horse.

           

— Judith, Jul 30, 2007
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Conect11

18 years 12 months ago

digging

your words, flow, etc. Can't really tell if it's truly "deep," or if it's far simpler, and thus more beautiful than I know, but I applaud it. Mark
Mark

Mark

18 years 11 months ago

Oh yeah 1

great flow here and the poor horse - all the work it has done. I think it smiles at the automobile :-) A real pleasure, Thanks

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