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weirdelf
weirdelf
Jun 10, 2007 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Rhyming senryu

Five rhymes for the times
Seven vodkas, ice and limes
Our  crimes for five dimes  


— weirdelf, Jun 10, 2007

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Region, Country: Sydney, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: The Romantics, The Mersey Sound, The Beats and, of course, The Bard

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weirdelf

weirdelf

19 years 1 month ago

I lied.

There are only 4 rhymes. Will try to do better next time
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Conect11

19 years 1 month ago

LIAR!

you're lucky Australia is already a penal colony! lol I also believe I commented on this elsewhere... it's still good, though.
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barbsdad2003

18 years 12 months ago

Short and Sweet!

And I like rhymes and times and limes and dimes. Although by last count I just don't accumulate enough of the dimes for these costly times. Thanx, Chuckles
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orgami

17 years ago

Thirsty for change

Dimes can buy Limes but cant cure scurvy drank a little drink and i feel quite nervy Sweet poem here from the way long!
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years ago

Way long!

thanks for looking back into my distant past feeling somewhat nervy myself Cheers, Jess
Seren

Seren

16 years 12 months ago

I can feel a headache coming

I can feel a headache coming on vodka does that to me but this poem is really good Jess loved it and I had a little laugh at the penal colony comment above LOL ... if they only knew eh ? ;) love Jayne x x

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