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Let's Now Not Cling
As we age
across life's each page
let's not now any longer rage
as we are about to leave this worldly stage
where since decades
we remain en caged
now we must pave our way
as newer actors come on stage
to show their rising ways
let's now shy away
as they now openly blissfully
orgasmic-ally engage
Style / type:
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
Wed, 2023-02-15 06:08
Changing of the Guard
Is this a poem about gracefully passing the torch to a younger generation?
Tim
lovedly
Wed, 2023-02-15 09:40
We all travel through similar times ...many times
very few vary
based on our
genes environment and circumstance
all vary but majorly minuscule..
as a matter of fact just saying
let's now not be the one's thriving on greed
Let's go on the laid out track
for each one some how differently
do you hear me
Geezer
Wed, 2023-02-15 09:52
I only...
want my younger siblings and the people that are my friends and family to have as good a time with reading, writing poetry and stories, as I have. How they do it, I leave up to them. Love ya, lovedly. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Wed, 2023-02-15 10:42
Thank ya
Geezerlyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
lovedly
Mon, 2023-02-20 00:42
Thank you so much Mark
for your inspiration and sweet content Live on we must then merge with the atmosphere as dust ...We all have no choice no voice
its a laid down drill
Seren
Mon, 2023-02-20 05:18
Dear Love
Your poem made me think of this quote...
"One day you will look back and see that all along you were blooming." - Morgan Harper Nichols
It's a wonderful poem. Bravo
Love and biggest hugs Sis xox
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
lovedly
Mon, 2023-02-20 07:36
Yeah thats why u r showing
your blooming pics sis
baby lol
nice quote though
Seren
Mon, 2023-02-20 07:39
Thats my Granddaughter her
Thats my Granddaughter her name is Abby, and I am in so in love with her, you'll see all four of my grandbabies I plan to change my picture more often!!!
love Sis x
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
lovedly
Mon, 2023-02-20 09:25
OH sis
what a treat 'twill be
friendly kids I love too
have 4 brightest kids
the world need to see too
ah hope some day
you will too