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ALL DAYS ARE MOTHER'S DAYS
And this is what we call cyclic
all changes
hands face and smile
once who led you to school
now stands cool
awaiting your arrival
the one who buttered your toasts for you
now waits a soft slice of bread from you
the one who kissed you daily to school
now waits for a kiss
will you give she thinks
a tear flows down her cheek
she knows smells now her repose
the son too has also gone through change
his consort is all for whom he remains
my son come once again
at least today 'tis Mother's rightful day
come and in my arms do play
just for once if you may...
if only for a wee while today...
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Lavender
Thu, 2023-02-02 21:20
All Days Are Mothers Days
Hello, Lovedly,
This feels like an homage to a specific special day - other than the traditional Mother's Day. Maybe birthday or anniversary? Tender last line.
Lav
Seren
Sat, 2023-02-04 10:33
Dear Lovely.
Kudos.
This holds a poignancy for me. I miss my mother everyday.
Love and hugs Sis xxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
lovedly
Sat, 2023-02-04 13:43
Thanks did you read MY MOM'S SMILES OVER 300 PAGES OF
COMMENTS FROM WORLD OVER
So many sites
My best poem then
now it is
''GIVE PEACE A CHANCE ''
READ across Internet
by over 11000 times
as of now
FROM NEO I don't know ...no way to know either
But I thank all who have read it
sis