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Few Win Many Lose
''She'' was good
but
we all are still striving
I have spent my entire youth
but still I'm trying
surviving
This world is a place
for furious ones
who rise and have fun
at cost of another one
all have a marathon run
When will I rise
and
fly sky high
like a soaring
eagle
never to return
hoping in my last battle
I'd have won
Let's afresh now begin
time is moving thin
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Edward nigma
Fri, 2020-09-25 09:10
Good work
That is life you live a little experience achievements and hardships then you take your last breath exhaling life and inhaling death.
I hope your doing fine in this horrid time of mass hysteria that plagues our populous
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.
scribbler
Fri, 2020-09-25 12:48
Hi loved
To the victor go the spoils. BUT who is the true victor?
lovedly
Fri, 2020-09-25 13:00
high stan
please define true
neither me can't say about you
you to Susan ma'am are true
after a long tyme you come stan
isn't it true of you
winner r u
lovedly
Fri, 2020-09-25 13:31
good analysis ma'am
kind words are rarely heard
this world is now heart broken
Covid curse
is it or was it
of human origin
flying on the backs of
BATS