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GIVE PEACE A CHANCE
It is cold, very cold
freezing temperatures
a mild drizzle
yet unmindful
she stands silently
like a statue
under the isolated tree
all about her come and see
why such depth of silence
they wonder who is she
so very sweet and lovely
fine
a veritable divine
her eyes don't blink
statue stark
into the daylight distant
rare vision
no one knows
where she is looking
yet her mission
is just to draw
a large searching crowd
who will come and see
her blankly
looking into eternity
towards the distant horizon
wilderness
mind totally blissfully absent
all come and shed a tear
many say smile, O dear
she has a silent demeanour
yet she conveys
why this war and trouble
Give Peace a Chance
A tear does trickle
Then ups her umbrella
Mission complete
It now snows incessantly
She's conveyed her message
from Canada
Comments
lovedly
Mon, 2020-07-20 03:26
afresh
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lovedly
Mon, 2020-07-20 07:00
15 thanks to you but
HOWZ the new poem
no comments what!
lovedly
Mon, 2020-07-20 08:42
15
'''take the reached away''
unclear
Neopoet Chat
Mon, 2020-07-20 09:13
Don't you think I know?
This is an old one. Neo Chat.
lovedly
Tue, 2022-07-05 17:21
THEN NOW PROGRESS IT
OVER 6000 READS ALL OVER THE UNIVERSE
NEOS BE HAPPY
Ray Whitaker
Tue, 2022-07-05 16:39
NICE POEM!
Thanks for sharing it!!!!
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lovedly
Tue, 2022-07-05 17:19
TO YOU
THANKS FOR READING IT
FEW DO 6300
MOST READ IT
BUT COMMENTS MANY CAN'T DO
sad U KNEW
no?