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Night is Disturbing

Submitted by lovedly on Sun, 2020-06-07 17:49

Night is Disturbing
no one is coming
the lights have dimmed
tonight
CORONA
shows a rise
who will hold the Prize
Of making a vaccine .

The world couldn't make one
since last Spanish flu
as time flew
100 years now

Who says the vaccine will come
before the next virus is due

who knows it
can any one
confide in me

night is disturbing

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
just passing time ...couldn't sleep--- slept the whole of Sunday
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Sun, 2020-06-07 20:40

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makes it more likely that you will die from lack of sleep. Don't worry about the virus, it's lack of sleep that makes you careless and more likely to make a mistake and get killed. ~ Geezer.
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lovedly

Mon, 2020-06-08 02:08

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I sleep more
but off timings.. that's all Gee Thanks I will love to live
as I shall never return
who has anyway
can you say

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lovedly

Mon, 2020-06-08 05:23

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you are really great
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