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The Sun- sets
SUN SETS TODAY
The days seem to end
as sun sets towards
the invisible horizon
there is still some time to amend
as the sun waits for a moment
they say God
but I think Grace
of the moment
to enable all to give their salutations
as the Son sets finally
the last post rings loudly
yesterday they did say
FOR HIM
the bells must as they will
Toll today
The greatest human of the day
just like anyone else
gradually passed away
the sun has set
the candles blown
his imaginary spirit
had lightening like flown
to another version of man
human or unknown
He has also been made
to rest in peace...
He was like a river
but we mostly are stream
merges he too with the ocean of time
Evaporation for all is common
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
lovedly
Mon, 2019-11-04 15:00
can you imagine
no reads since ages
last lost millennia may be
then read
my next two poetry
Roscoe Lane
Tue, 2019-11-05 02:26
Beautiful,
Beautiful words, Regards Roscoe...
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
lovedly
Tue, 2019-11-05 11:07
thanks Roscoe no one had read this
so I lifted it up
Not many go deep in search
all only want to be read only
thanks