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piffling waffling and machine gunning have the essence of moderna poetry

Submitted by lovedly on Sat, 2017-04-15 13:43

the ones without the piffle and waffle...(hahahaaa)

Piffling
waffling
and
machine gunning
have the essence of moderna
emotionale poetry

all poets through my poetry
then shuffle
to find gems
embedded in the deep sea
where one may find
lovedly soonly...

muchly aged is he
Neopoets may soon
abandon me

but for ever remember
the creator of free verse poettry
as spreads
LOVED ila ...LOVEDLY
hopefully!!!!

LOLLOLLY....

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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jane210660

Sat, 2017-04-15 16:07

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There is a huge difference between piffle/waffle and machine gunning.
Machine gunning is direct and to the point.
Piffly waffle isn't.
In my book, directness is always an advantage, less room for misinterpretation.
Jx

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lovedly

Sat, 2017-04-15 23:36

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I am a thick headed poet
simple
but plain
I never indulge in disdain
you all poets
enjoy the game
as much as I piffle
along the poetric lane
thanks for the delightful visit
once again

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