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Maverick
Member since February 17, 2011
Member for 15 years, 3 months
Atlas (The sky-bearer)
People only view you
from far, far away.
You are the richest painting,
the tops of the tallest trees;
to be seen,
but never touched.
Your arms stretch,
and swell, but never seem to strain,
though the clouds swirl
above your golden curls.
The storm above
just bides it's time.
The rains drop heavily,
on your over-burdened shoulders.
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You are solid and strong,
but struggling to raise
the gray mass
that would tear you down.
Don't let the rains fall
now, when you have come so far.
Not when I am here for you.
Here, raise your arms again,
and we will raise
the clouds again together.
Maverick’s timeline
- February 2026
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17 TueAnniversary
15 years of membership
- February 2021
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17 WedAnniversary
10 years of membership
- February 2016
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17 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- February 2013
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15 FriReceived a critique
on The Sound of Sadness from @Ian.T
"I have looked at this one from a while back, I think that it needs a little re read for others to assess its value, I found it secretively good. If there is anything that needs attention then I look forward to any edit…" - February 2012
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17 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- March 2011
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01 Tue
- February 2011
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22 TueReceived a critique
on To a Past Friend from @weirdelf
"Seren thought it was a strong ending I I thought it was weak, Guess It amounts to revenge," -
22 TueReceived a critique
on To a Past Friend from @weirdelf
"And the poem is written in the plain.poetic language everyone can relate to. But isn't it a bit whingy? How about a stronger ending?" -
21 Mon
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17 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
- September 2008
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03 Wed
- February 2008
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22 FriFirst publication
Things I Should Have Said
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21 ThuFirst critique offered
on "twenty two minutes ago" by @Snpdrgon
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15 FriHighest posting month
February 2008 — 10 poems
About Me
I'm from a little town in Alaska. I doubt most people know where to put it on a map, but that's why I like living there. No people. Or at least less people. I'm in highschool, so what I write tends to be of a lesser quality, and more emotionally charged. Sorry about that. :)
Location: USA
Edgar Allan Poe
Stephen Dunn
Robert Frost
Frances Ellen Watkins Harper
Tom Wayman
Recent Work
One of my favorites
Atlas (The sky-bearer)
Maverick
The Sound of Sadness
confused sadness
My Confidents
Little Girl
Words
Remember?
The eye's fear
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