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The Sound of Sadness
Sadness has a sound, friend.
I have heard it
sobbing, weeping in the throat of the widow
and the children.
All wrapped up in quilts;
quilts of happy colors;
as if that will change anything.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Review Request (Direction):
Is the internal logic consistent?
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Editing stage:
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Comments
Ian.T
Fri, 2013-02-15 09:45
Maverick
I have looked at this one from a while back, I think that it needs a little re read for others to assess its value, I found it secretively good.
If there is anything that needs attention then I look forward to any edit that is suggested. Yours Ian.T
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