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When I traverse
poetry verse
across the universe
I come across rarely
but poetry like this verse
it's needless to say is
as lovely as mom and mom earth
Lady poet teacher
teach me
judge some of mine
if you could

TIME is a premium we all know
but a blessings coming from you
will glow
as your poetry like the Niagara does flow
Now we all know
lovely natural poet is thee
like me hopefully

But i compose only FREESTYLE
as to delve in other themes I shy
and after reading me
many have changed their stance
Moderna poems
now they post in advance
reading me perhaps by chance

Life is one long romance
like a river we flow
ere off we go!

Some day
One day
if not today
another day
they say unknown
still remain we may...

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I put my sign up but it didn't improve the comments received, so I changed it for a "FOR SALE" sign,
Where you have to pay to have a poem written for you.
Still no comments, I wonder if even Loved reads any of my words ???? lol
You take care and Percy Vere, very similar to "Paul Revere" he never stopped good silver smith though, so take good care as we are the main poets for filling the stream...
Yours, Sparrow..
PS:- have sent Ian T into the desert for 40 days..

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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

I am a rolling stone only
when will u return from Sahara?
all the best get hotted

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I is going to the desert to await comments on my work that is why I may be some time!!!!
You take care out there a storm is approaching the USA and it heeds to no man or woman for that matter.
The Eastern seaboard of the States is packed with houses and apartments at near sea level, I feel for those that built on sand, and didn't heed the ancient warnings about that.
I shall have to return soon have many other things to do, Yours Ian..

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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

Why did those guys not for surfs cater and built houses on sandy beds hoping with their rock and rolling in bed the sands below will be dead and they will then say how they saved costs for foundations Now they need to totally abandon the house the storm the sand and just walk away holding their kids hands sad but then they say they are the leaders of a future foundation.
Let storms rage we are nuclear more than storms they say
let them come our way,we will shy them away
storms come and go away for another
more terrifying day

Take care Ian I am no where near

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Goodness gracious me but you are a cheeky bugger, Lovedly. I guess to some extent it is part of why I like you, cheekiness is one of my most valued traits.

Feedback has always been an issue here, we go through better times and worse. I can offer two suggestions that will guarantee that you will get more feedback, and you are not going to like either of them.

Post less frequently. Use the time to re-read and revise your works, incorporating some of the prosodic techniques you must surely have picked up over your years here. It will make your work no less freestyle, just better, more interesting and more worthy of comment.

Make your own feedback to others more useful, offering actual suggestions and written in plain English. Feedback that helps is much more likely to elicit a return in kind. And for fucks sake please please please refrain from making your feedback just one of your poems and especially asking them to read yours.

If you are prepared to give it a go I'll give you private tuition. Each time you post what you think is valuable critique send me a PM and I'll help you make it even better. Fair deal?

cheers,
Jess
Everything changes bar one. Neopoet's 'Prime Directive'-
"Critique don't comment".
https://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines

point two
Accepted
Shall obey thy command .
.but to post a comment
then convert it into a poem
just stand by me
don't reprimand me

I get butterflies in my eyes
others get it in their tummy's

Now please forgive me
poetry flows through my veins
as does garbage
through our drains
half stuck- half way

Now say
what you want to say
you may ask me to fuck away
today
I shall you master
like a slave obey
come what may
if you say
go away
after Autumns poem
I shall run away
what have you now to say
JUST
SAY!
Hope you are fully well
today!
Let me pray.

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