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Poetry is a Dying Art

I have been on the Internet
now for almost over two decades
also I'm a published author
by name

All web site guys
make money and go...
except you and me
innocent Neos

Do you like me,
now see
poetry is a lagging art
archaic old fellows style

we are young
at least at heart
inside out
why not compose
mostly
free style
as Lovedly
does

your guess /verse
please your own views
at worse

their love they show

Do compose a poem
all poets of
neo

A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY @ 80 SANS ALL

Now I stand at the threshold of time
the first step to teen
of toothless old wine
no more sweets no Valentine

But as Shakespeare
had he been today
would have said

I lost my breath
when I was born
short of red corpuscles
lesser oxygen
no stamina

then at my wedding
lost my nasal
ALLERGIC RHINITIS
I was told I'd married
no honey moon
that soon

don't read these Q UP please is in waiting only

SPERMOISIM ACTUALITY---- NO THEORY

x1-Y==MALES' SPERMS ---MAKE
x2-x3==FEMALES' FACTORY MAKE
SECRETLY
merge in
the Darkest valley

they each other chase
x1 plus x2 or x1 plus x3
a GIRL always make
no other take

but Y PLUS x2 OR x3 ==SON only
DUPLICATE OF SUN

in the same
dungeon
of darkest valleys

no anaconda now
only zygote
as it kills every goat's ego

metaphorical poetry thesaurus

metaphorical poetry thesaurus
vanilla
intrigue
veritable

A clear picture must come to mind

a guy wrote to me
he was gay
''vanilla''
is a lovely metaphor

I wanted to help him grow normal
but no he insisted
now whenever I use
vanilla in my poetry
I see him leaking
as if the NIagara fall
is really piping
not falling

CREATIVITY BLOG ADD YOUR TWO PENCE WORTH here!!!

Blog on Creativity

Hope someone will read it

Poetry is nothing more
than one's inner personal emotions
each one has different

See how Irene
and now
Rula
have taken over

Let me see if there is anyone left over

raj!!!
you helped them

Creativity is the elixir for
modern poetry'
imagery
Simile
and all that which have gone
achaic
let Shakespeare awake
as
thee thou and ye may be

These be my views
then now
SHARE YOURS

Strange discourse LOVEDLY accidentally came across

''''......is that Lovedly hates it. [grins savagely]??????!!!!!!>>>>>>>.......''''
I just came by
and thank you for your intense impartial support
O MOST friendly one

I don't hate nor decry
I am a poet since early 1950's
with a current times mind galore
so I have my own mind
not on rustic rails
I wander all over the universe

my teachers all said
this guy wanders
but could not correct and say
WHERE HOW AND
why

''We all have not come
to live for ever
but to live a life
worthy enough
we have to live through
and
must endeavour''

Thank you

A critique must teach you ultimately...
in improving your poetry/art /work

It is not necessary
for a critique too say
''you are a
wanker
self praise
seeker
pulling ones skirt up
like a gal
come ''read'' me
like an open book
kind sort of

This is base not criticism
by a critique
do you agree
or disagree

The critique must give suggestions and views
how to improve the poem/work

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