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LadyInRed26
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Little Fingers
Little fingers
Grasp my hand
Wobbly feet
Across the sand
Little fingers
Let me go
Running full force
Into the unknown
Little fingers
Clasp the sand
Stuck on like glue
To a little hand
Little fingers
Cry for help
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Whipping grains
Across the scalp
Little fingers
Wants to stay
Little fingers
Run and play
LadyInRed26’s timeline
- October 2022
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29 SatAnniversary
5 years of membership
- October 2018
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29 MonAnniversary
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- October 2017
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29 SunReceived a critique
on Little Fingers from @Geezer
"waste any time in making the changes you needed to and it makes the poem so much better. I am so looking forward to your next poem. Don't rush, it doesn't have to be every day, but you can if you get a streak going on…" -
29 SunReceived a critique
on Little Fingers from @swamp-witch
"Again, Welcome! This is a sweet first poem. I know parents across the world can read it and imagine their little ones, which is a special feeling. I think that's this poem's best quality. It's clearly about your own fam…" -
29 SunReceived a critique
on Little Fingers from @Geezer
"the theme is good and it makes sense all the way through, there are a few spelling mistakes, but other than that, you have written a credible poem! Welcome to Neo. and I hope that you get the best we have to offer. Don'…" -
29 SunReceived a critique
on Little Fingers from @lonlyhrtsclub13
"I like the simplicity of the words and how the images were so clear. Many memories of my kids as babies walking across the beach and having fun. Good job for a first write." -
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