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Hon
Member since August 11, 2022
Member for 3 years, 9 months
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Autumn Arrival Image prompt -Golden Leaves of life
In the autumn
vibrant decorate
form the radiant
beauty view
wind dance in
a softly sway
In the sunlight
aglow carry through
the divine scene
brilliance display
of the falling green
trees and flowers
are losing their color
Life continues to move on
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resonate the thought
of resilience remind
learning lessons instilled
in the mind
Strength finds in change
with the wisdom to embrace
of nature guiding light
Leading with an
inspiration of golden
leaves of life
Hon’s timeline
- August 2024
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28 WedReceived a critique
on Autumn Arrival Image prompt -Golden Leaves of life from @Lavender
"Hello, Hon, This reminds me of your "Beach Day" poem. A gathering of abstract images best felt without a structured form - simply stated. Your poetry reminds me of a dancer (I know, kinda silly) who moves this way and t…" -
28 WedReceived a critique
on Autumn Arrival Image prompt -Golden Leaves of life from @Candlewitch
"very unique and special...I much enjoyed the whole poem but these were my favorites: Strength finds in change with the wisdom to embrace of nature guiding light Leading with an inspiration of golden leaves of life *hugs…" -
28 WedReceived a critique
on Autumn Arrival Image prompt -Golden Leaves of life from @Alex Tanner
"At first I was unsure. But this grew on me. I like punctuation and I often comment on the lack or incorrect use of it. But this needs none, at least not from you. The reader can put the punctuation where they want, let…" -
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21 WedReceived a critique
on I lost the instructions from @Lavender
"Hello, Hon, A sense of detachment and feeling adrift, without instruction until receiving a divine transformation. Very nice. Thank you! L" -
21 WedReceived a critique
on I lost the instructions from @Candlewitch
"my favorite lines of this poem are: Without a rescue of a given direction come to a destination that left behind with much confusion and worrisome In times of doubt with many questions because these lines are very easy…" -
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15 ThuPosting milestone
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- December 2023
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15 FriHighest posting month
December 2023 — 8 poems
- September 2023
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30 SatContest commendation
September 2023 Challenge Waking up in the back of a police car
- August 2023
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24 ThuCritiqued
"Mirror Mirror" by @RoseBlack
"I like your imaginary creative style with the Mirror theme-based narrative storytelling poetry. It is very clever and intriguing writing descriptive from a 1st person perspective. -Hon" -
11 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- July 2023
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07 FriCritiqued
"Dreaming" by @Clentin
"A good horror poem with interesting and engaging rhythm descriptive. Simple and easy to understand. Good imagery and creativity writing style. I like how it started out with an introduction of personal descriptive then…" - April 2023
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30 SunContest commendation
April 2023 Contest Last Time Fooled
- March 2023
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23 ThuCritiqued
"Challenge in the Land of Chaos" by @Clentin
"I enjoyed this poem it is simple with a moral value behind the theme. I like the simple descriptive of word usage that comes well along with the body symmetry physical gesture comparison.it is a good matching. If you co…" -
14 TueCritiqued
"What Makes a Human Being" by @Shelby Pryor
"This is a very inspiring and awakening call for all of us. You nailed everything that it brings to our attention. The demo of human relations and the significant moral value behind your message. Thank you for reminding…" -
14 TueCritiqued
"When a child Gave me Advice (Words That Count)" by @Clentin
"Your poem provide a spectacular perspective about children’s way of thinking. They speak from their mind. And we need to be more considerate of their needs. Often time we overlook their thought of mind and neglecting th…" -
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- February 2023
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- January 2023
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14 SatCritiqued
"In My Element (Erotica)" by @RoseBlack
"The interpretation of this poem is about a man. The author is using the element of the sky to paint a picture of scenery to describe her emotional connection with him." -
13 FriCritiqued
"Passion Flower (disclaimer erotica)" by @Rosewood Apothecary
"Hi, Rosewood, a very beautiful written poem about a love theme with many well descriptive imaginary usage of word and metaphor. Simple but get to the point. Many figurative languages. This is the best poem that it stood…" -
13 FriFirst critique offered
on "Passion Flower (disclaimer erotica)" by @Rosewood Apothecary
- December 2022
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31 SatContest commendation
December 2022 Random Challenge Favorite wintry memory
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31 SatFirst contest commendation
December 2022 Random Challenge Favorite wintry memory
with the poem "Favorite wintry memory ".
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- October 2022
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27 ThuFirst publication
Terror
- August 2022
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11 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 78 days later.
About Me
About me
I am from the USA and my favorite hobbies are writing, reading, and listening to music.
Location: USA, USA
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