Guy Jenkins

Member since September 8, 2016

Member for 9 years, 9 months

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Unenendurable

Posted Nov 24, 2016 · 5 lines · 2 critiques

Unendurable pleasure
Indefinitely prolonged
Gilgamesh cup of tea
That's a Satori

Guy

September 2021
08 Wed

Anniversary
5 years of membership
September 2017
08 Fri

Anniversary
One year of membership
November 2016
25 Fri

Received a critique
on Unenendurable from @themoonman
"I'd give it a title that helps ... saying that, I'm not sure what you are saying. I love Gilgamesh, unsure what the reference means ... perhaps an old, very flavorful cup of tea. It's something I've done as well (use no…"
24 Thu

Posted a poem
Unenendurable
"Unendurable pleasure"
Open thread 5 lines
17 Thu

Received a critique
on Leaves from @Keith Logan
"The first three lines are one of those Japanese forms I find so forgettable but the rest? If it were mine I'd reverse the order putting the nature reference where it belongs, in the last line. Indefinitely prolonged Une…"
17 Thu

Posted a poem
Leaves
"Leaves fall"
Open thread 10 lines
October 2016
17 Mon

Received a critique
on Satori-2 from @Candlewitch
"if you could add this (or something like it, that would help the reader) as a footnote. sa·to·ri [saa táwree] spiritual illumination: in Zen Buddhism, a state of spiritual enlightenment that is a spiritual objective oth…"
16 Sun

Posted a poem
Ravings of a lunatic, Tales of an orrdinary Guy
"Book published, but not in print, was listed on the internet, edited by Athol Yeoman"
Open thread 5 lines
14 Fri

First critique offered
on "Age Gauge:" by @OriginalRhyku
01 Sat

First publication
Satori
September 2016
08 Thu

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 23 days later.