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Efepete
Member since February 21, 2026
Member for 3 months, 15 days
Same sides of a coin
It’s us, it’s us.
We are the very same;
if only you’d look past my chiseled chin
and my plump lips.
You’d start to notice the decay,
start to notice the rot seeping out.
In so many ways the final end is the most obvious,
if only you would open those eyes
and not look with your lustful soul.
Open those eyes and see.
Now answer me: are we not the same?
Death and life both asleep—
the only difference is that life
dreams while asleep
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and death simply sleeps.
But do not fall victim to deceit and be a fool:
these dreams of life are nothing but a delay
while your flesh rots, your senses dull,
and your bones ache…
Do not let your last breath be your moment of realisation;
do not let your life flash before your eyes
in your final moments…
Rather, my friends, open your senses,
notice the silence,
and realise they are both the same
in perfect comparison.
Not a single fork—what is it to dream
when you never really wake up?
That’s death as well.
So yes, look again, my friends:
open your eyes and see
how the same we are—“Death and life.”
Efepete’s timeline
- February 2026
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21 SatReceived a critique
on Skies of the night from @Geezer
"this as a quest for a better life; a trek through the sands of your past. I think that it could be better and smoother, if you trim up the lies and maintain an even rhythm, it doesn't have to rhyme. The Stars of the Nig…" -
21 Sat
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21 SatNew follower
@Efepete
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21 SatFirst publication
Skies of the night
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21 SatJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Dear Me,
These poems were written exploring themes of loneliness, loss, and love. The work also draws inspiration from the longing for divine intervention within places of torment.
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