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Creyes
Member since July 8, 2026
Member for 8 days
Rise of Spring Fall of Decline
As I watched two roses grow together, it brought me into a past to a love I thought was pure and innocent. We shared the rain, we shared the sunlight, we even shared the wind that roared like a lion in hunger.
Blinking the tears of sorrow away, two roses I saw no more but lifeless stem of wilted flowers that sung not of love and togetherness, but of regretted remorse, and the petals delicately fluttered to the ground.
Saddened at first then I think these petals that lay amongst the soil can still share their fate together, but then along came the wind howling with anger and blew the petals away into nothingness, and a destiny together they had no more. Just as our thought to be love of purness forevermore
Creyes’s timeline
- July 2026
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16 ThuCritiqued
"The Pool" by @TheWanderer78
"Smooth and beautiful and I loved it which,I'm not very easily impressed so great job and I look forward to more of your work ;)" -
16 ThuFirst critique offered
on "The Pool" by @TheWanderer78
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09 ThuNew follower
@Tink
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09 ThuReceived a critique
on Rise of Spring Fall of Decline from @Tink
"Hello! Welcome to Neopoet. you can usually find me in chat if you have any questions, let me know. I really enjoyed this poem. I will be honest, it took me reading it twice as the way you wrote it is different than what…" -
09 ThuReceived a critique
on Rise of Spring Fall of Decline from @Geezer
"that this is supposed to be a forbidden romance, so I will say that the ending does it justice. Nice to get away from all the hunky-dory everything is alright at the end kind of thing. It seems that you have managed to…" -
08 WedFirst publication
Rise of Spring Fall of Decline
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08 WedPosted a poem
Rise of Spring Fall of Decline
"As I watched two roses grow together, it brought me into a past to a love I thought was pure and innocent. We shared the rain, we shared the sunlight, we even shared the wind that roared like a lion in hunger." -
08 WedJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
I've been writing my whole life. I have decades of work that I've just been sitting on. I thought maybe it's time to do something with them while I still draw breath.
Location: USA
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