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crazy-daisy
Member since July 8, 2026
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Child of War
Father o' Father, I stand at the door, calling you softly, as I have been warned.
As you sleep with the dagger, a constant bedfellow, forever at the ready, tucked under your pillow
Father o' Father, the memories never fade. The teachings of a solider are never far away
Father o' Father what stalks you each night, when the body rests, and the mind takes flight,
Anguish to linger, in the break of morning light
Father o' Father, answer me this, where is the boy, who rollicked in the mist.
So filled with dreams, of what the future could hold, replaced by the horrors, of what shall never be told.
Deeply festered, into your soul thoughts lay in waiting, for that loss of control
Father o' Father, how could it be, through the eyes of a child, so much pain to see.
Her eyes have seen the agony and the remnants of horror, mirrored deep in the eyes of a weary old soldier.
Though the child is born, long after the war, she has seen the battles fought in the suffering he bore.
She will forever share the wounds and beliefs, her father stood for
Father o' Father as the years pass us by, there is a fleeting glimmer, of a twinkle in your eye
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The boy who once was, has returned for a time, to laugh with a child, who's born long after the war.
Father o' Father, so well the lessons you taught, I still shake my shoes, more often than not, convinced I will be bitten as I was taught
How to cook on a can, in case there's a need, how life can change in the blink of an eye. To call softly from the threshold, a safe distance away.
When I had trials in life, as everyone does, he would always say “Count yourself lucky, in this lifetime of yours, if this is the worst you have to go through in the time we all have
Father o' Father a lifetime of waiting for that twinkle to see, so we can run through the mist filled with our dreams
Father o' Father, I stand at the door, calling you softly, as I've often been warned.
As you still sleep with the dagger, a constant bedfellow, forever at the ready, tucked under your pillow
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