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Some Summer Haiku
Mid day heat shimmers
Over a close cut hay field
In heart of summer
Beneath a large oak
Biting breaths of soggy air
July in the south
Dew spangled dawn
Disappears after sunrise
Becomes humid air
Bird pants on deck rail
In the late afternoon heat
craving cooler days
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Kailashana2
Fri, 2011-07-08 09:27
Not bad Stan, not bad. ;-)
Not bad Stan, not bad. ;-)
~A
scribbler
Fri, 2011-07-08 13:22
Hi anna
just a couple of quickies I threw together last night. thanks for visiting..........stan
Barbara Writes
Fri, 2011-07-08 10:05
Stan
nicely done ,i enjoy reading your haiku
*Collaborative Poetry Workshop* American Version of Japanese Poetry ~ Renga ~ Haiku, Senyru, Tanka.
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scribbler
Fri, 2011-07-08 13:23
hi Barb
Thank you I'm glad you dropped by.........stan
loved
Fri, 2011-07-08 14:15
just great
5 7 5
straight
sixer
nah eight!
loved
scribbler
Fri, 2011-07-08 19:29
hi loved
thanks for visiting. Been so busy I've had little time to comment on friends' poems lately, but I Have been reading them. Reckon I've too many irons in the fire.......................stan
loved
Sun, 2011-07-10 00:15
must share
hot irons with frnds
i liked ur whisky comment on my reactions
and letter written on Ians behest
thanx
loved
scribbler
Fri, 2011-07-08 19:31
hi
Not exactly my forte either but I like to give them a run every once in a while...............stan
Leonard
Sun, 2011-07-10 03:24
Very neat Stan
An enjoyable read.
Leonard
Leonard Daranjo
"When the waiting stops, the living begins"
scribbler
Sun, 2011-07-10 07:39
hi Leonard
Thanks for dropping by and kind comment................stan