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Calvin
Member since October 21, 2024
Member for 1 year, 7 months
I'm sorry
I'm sorry I lost you
I'm sorry I wasn't enough
to make you stay
I'm sorry you hate me
I'm sorry you lost me
I tell myself you lost me because
I can't bear the thought that you're
happier without me
I'm sorry for being delusional
I'm sorry I didn't warn you
that I'd be the end of us
I'm sorry I made you mine
For a second I believed you could be
I'm so fucking sorry
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I'm sorry for being me
Had I known, I would've dug a deeper
grave for myself
I'd still have you, without me
Which is enough
I'm sorry I scared you
I swear I didn't mean to
I thought for sure I could tame
my demon
Turns out I'm weak
I gave in and you gave away
Most of all,
I'm sorry I love you
Calvin’s timeline
- October 2025
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21 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- October 2024
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31 ThuReceived a critique
on I'm sorry from @Candlewitch
"I agree with AI on the language usage to spark up the poetry. also make the title I'm Sorry. get rid of the lowercase "s". these are the lines I liked best: I'm sorry I scared you I swear I didn't mean to I thought for…" -
30 Wed
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23 WedReceived a critique
on Little do they know from @Candlewitch
"My advice is: Forget Them and give no credence to what They say! They sound like They are envious of what you have. Either that, or They are idiots! nice to meet you! *hugs, Cat" -
23 Wed
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21 MonReceived a critique
on Stay! from @Candlewitch
"This is pretty impressive for a first poem! my favorite lines are: Break me Shatter my spirit Be my undoing I'll love you forever Hypnotize me Put me under a spell Say my name and Watch me worship you welcome to the ran…" -
21 MonFirst publication
Stay!
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21 Mon
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21 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
My name is Odwa Linganiso, I'm 20 years old and have always loved poetry but have never been able to write something. Until recently when something happened that forced me to able to voice out my feelings. Poetry has become a way for me to project my feelings through words and I would love to share my poetry with the world.
Location: South Africa
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