The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The imagery in your poem is vivid and evocative, creating a strong sense of love and connection. The comparisons you make, such as loving someone like a sunset or a lifeboat in a storm, are powerful and help convey the depth of emotion. Consider exploring more unique and unexpected metaphors to add layers to your expressions of love. Additionally, pay attention to the flow and rhythm of your poem to ensure a smooth reading experience for the audience. Keep refining your work to capture the essence of love in even more nuanced and captivating ways.

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is okay, Your language use is mostly okay, but:

"Let's pick the petals [from] flowers, to verify our love".
"Dance in the parking lot, in the lights of your car".
"And our tale will be of folklore"

Comma between rain and just, comma between love and a tale.

I like the rhythm and the tone. A little tune-up and this is good to go.
Of course, my comments and critique are yours to do with as you wish,
use whatever you like or nothing at all. ~ Geezer.
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A very nice piece. Listen to Geezer. he will always be objective. I won't agree with him on the parking lots. He wants you to dance in one, I think its fine if you want to dance in more than one. There could perhaps be a little pruning. eg, fourth line I would ditch the 'it' and start with 'Feels'. What it all boils down to is how happy you are with the work. The more you read it, or any other compositions you will see places where you realise it is not quite as you want. Only time and experience will bring that. As I said, a nice piece, I enjoy reading the more romantic poetry most of all and writing it, though I tend to make mine much darker. Keep it it up. Alex.

A deserved winner. Alex