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A stranger
A stranger
In the venue where we met
I saw a stranger in the black.
I saw his eyes,
They were like ice.
I heard his voice,
It wasn’t noise.
I saw the wings on his back
And blood on his neck…
You could think I am a liar,
But I am sure it was a vampire!
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Last few words:
Once again it is autumn and Halloween inspiration.
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
RoseBlack
Mon, 2022-09-19 17:58
A fun write
Beware of those vampires! They could be anywhere!
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~RoseBlack~
Anna Severchuk
Fri, 2022-09-30 16:03
Thank you,Mark!
Thank you,Mark!
Geezer
Tue, 2022-09-20 11:08
It is the time...
for the beasts in us... to come forth, to be scared of what we see in ourselves. I truly believe that the nightmares that we write about, are the things we fear reside in us! Good job of scaring us with that. ~ Geezer.
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Anna Severchuk
Fri, 2022-09-30 16:04
Or we are just inspired by
Or we are just inspired by the mystery and weather...
Jackweb
Fri, 2022-09-23 18:25
Terrified!
The poem drops a visual imagery with a fearful scenerio.
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Administrative ...
Mon, 2022-09-26 17:45
Congratulations
Great creation, Anna, and well deserving weekly choice selection.
Mark
Neopoet Administrative Council
Anna Severchuk
Fri, 2022-09-30 16:05
Thank you so much!
Thank you so much!